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collie dog by shirleys-pencil-art

:icontjlart:
This looks so very real definatley one of my fave of yours. I really can't pick any faults with it aside from maybe where the tassels are at the bottom of the cushion you might want to put a tiny bit more of shading under those - as they look flush to the pillow and would be raised slightly and cast a small shadow. I notice you have a bit already - Obviously I haven't seen the original photo too but thought id mention it. Aside from that minuscule thing it's absolutley awesome ! Looks like and old photo. Really impressed - you continue to inspire me with every work you do I have really loved watching you grow over the last year an again want to thank you for all your help and support throughout :) keep doing what your doing shirl you improve vastly every day - big love :)
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TJLArt Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah by the looks id just say do I little more shade on the cushion next to dog - on tassels and a little on cushion too but the dog itself and the cushion look spot on ! Hope this helps. I've never written a critique before but thought you might appreciate it :)
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:iconshirleys-pencil-art:
hi tim thanks alot for taking the time to do this,i did wounder about the shade theres a photo on my fb page in my tips on black fur album [link] again for your continued support
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